Picture Book Critiques
Have a manuscript that you'd like feedback on?
I offer critiques/feedback for picture book manuscripts.
Fees are $50 for manuscripts under 800 words.
I offer critiques/feedback for picture book manuscripts.
Fees are $50 for manuscripts under 800 words.
Testimonials
"I was first introduced to Shaunda through the Writing Barn workshop for picture book writing. As a new author, Shaunda's feedback has played an essential role in my understanding of writing for children. She is open and honest, and willing to dive into a text right away with her expertise. Amongst the positive, uplifting encouragement, Shaunda understands how to provide the feedback writers need in order to bring their text to life." -- Gary Gray Jr., author of I'm From, illustrated by Oge Mora
"S. K. Wenger provided feedback that was not only positive and helpful, but her suggestions were centered around the craft of writing, rather than opinion only. Because of this, I have been able to utilize her recommendations across various writing projects. Highly Recommend!" -- Lori Daugherty, pre-published author
"S. K. Wenger made vital tweaks to a NF manuscript that I sent her. I knew that I hadn't quite gotten it yet, but wasn't sure what didn't feel right. Her feedback hit the nail on the head and cleared the way to finishing that MS." --Jyoti Rajan Gopal, author of American Desi, My Paati's Saris, One Sweet Song, and many other forthcoming books
"I just wanted to say thanks once again for all your help with [X manuscript]. Even though it didn't make the cut for PBParty, it's my agent's choice for the next book to go out on submission." -- T. Fletcher, published book forthcoming 2026
From my time as a Rate Your Story judge: "I've written to RYS before regarding this, but I just to reiterate, [S. K. Wenger's] critiques are always fantastic. Well thought out, insightful, constructive, actionable, etc." -- B. Canterbury, author of the forthcoming My Life is Weird series and Farm Shark.
"Your suggestions are fantastic! I do think you are the best in giving feedback on humor. I look forward to revising with your suggestions in mind." -- J. Cooper, pre-published author
"Thank you for your incredibly thoughtful critique! You brought up so many great questions and considerations to strengthen my story. I appreciate you reading the back matter as well. You have an amazing mix of science and writing knowledge!" --A. King, pre-published author
"[S. K.] gave me great pointers and challenged me to show a few scenes rather than tell. She is very easy to work with. She provides great suggestions for revisions. My story got stronger and tighter." -- Dana, pre-published author
"I was first introduced to Shaunda through the Writing Barn workshop for picture book writing. As a new author, Shaunda's feedback has played an essential role in my understanding of writing for children. She is open and honest, and willing to dive into a text right away with her expertise. Amongst the positive, uplifting encouragement, Shaunda understands how to provide the feedback writers need in order to bring their text to life." -- Gary Gray Jr., author of I'm From, illustrated by Oge Mora
"S. K. Wenger provided feedback that was not only positive and helpful, but her suggestions were centered around the craft of writing, rather than opinion only. Because of this, I have been able to utilize her recommendations across various writing projects. Highly Recommend!" -- Lori Daugherty, pre-published author
"S. K. Wenger made vital tweaks to a NF manuscript that I sent her. I knew that I hadn't quite gotten it yet, but wasn't sure what didn't feel right. Her feedback hit the nail on the head and cleared the way to finishing that MS." --Jyoti Rajan Gopal, author of American Desi, My Paati's Saris, One Sweet Song, and many other forthcoming books
"I just wanted to say thanks once again for all your help with [X manuscript]. Even though it didn't make the cut for PBParty, it's my agent's choice for the next book to go out on submission." -- T. Fletcher, published book forthcoming 2026
From my time as a Rate Your Story judge: "I've written to RYS before regarding this, but I just to reiterate, [S. K. Wenger's] critiques are always fantastic. Well thought out, insightful, constructive, actionable, etc." -- B. Canterbury, author of the forthcoming My Life is Weird series and Farm Shark.
"Your suggestions are fantastic! I do think you are the best in giving feedback on humor. I look forward to revising with your suggestions in mind." -- J. Cooper, pre-published author
"Thank you for your incredibly thoughtful critique! You brought up so many great questions and considerations to strengthen my story. I appreciate you reading the back matter as well. You have an amazing mix of science and writing knowledge!" --A. King, pre-published author
"[S. K.] gave me great pointers and challenged me to show a few scenes rather than tell. She is very easy to work with. She provides great suggestions for revisions. My story got stronger and tighter." -- Dana, pre-published author